unfinished poem
Friday, April 20, 2007I want to share my life with you and face the unknown.
I’m not someone known to take risks
But with you I’ll take that chance.
You know that I’m afraid.
You know I’m full of pride.
You just know me so well.
I want to thank you for what I learned about life.
Some of its complexities.
Some of its joy.
Some of its sorrows.
You taught me well enough.
I lost my concentration and now I can’t continue my poem anymore. Well, I’ll try again next time:o)
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Haha! Great! thanks for finishing the poem for me..nice!
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You may think I know you too well
We’ve shared more than joy and sorrow
But why do you feel that you’re taking risks with me?
Maybe because I know you more than you know me
and I don’t blame you for that
I would like you to take the chance with me
Because you may have thought that I know you too well
But there’s still a lot about you that I want to probe and discover
Same as you need to get to know me as well
Let’s take the odds. Frightening as it may be.
Coz there’s nothing like facing the unknown
with you around, I know won’t be forlorn
(haha thought i’d continue it for you)
Posted by larrybored at May 7, 2007, 9:27 am